This is my comic strip that shows a character throwing rubbish and being thrown at. My theme of the comic is to show that many small acts can have a resounding effect.
This is about the main character of the story not being considerate and thus throws rubbish anywhere he goes. Because others does the same thing, he is a last, affected.
1.I chose the bear being my main character of the comic strip as the bear best show the laziness of some people in the society nowadays. To represent an urban city, it is best to choose a flat and by the road as my background. These also contribute to my comic being more 'aive'.
2.Through these images, we can easily relate them to our usual live, also, what we see very commonly through the days etc: throwing rubbish on the ground. The background depicts an urban city, the character has the mbecauseovements I want, and the sequence shows what the character did and the effect.
3.As the theme of my comic is that small acts by many people can cause a resounding effect, firstly, because the surrounding buildings are flats, it shows that there may be many people. Then, the bear shows one of the resident and that what small acts of inconsiderate may cause a huge problem that probably will apply to him/herslf.
I have spotted a wrong word in paragraph 2,line 10. It should be alive and not aive.
ReplyDeleteI think that your theme is very clear cut and I like the way you end your story. You could also add in theme like we should put ourselves in other people's shoes and spare a thought for them if we do not want the same treatment.
Overall, I think that you story was interesting and brought out a very important theme in society nowadays, but I think you could still have more detailed explanation. You could explain like which part of your comic is your climax, setting etc. However, I think you have put in effort so keep it up!